Comments on: Cyber Mummies http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/ Some assembly required Sun, 05 Sep 2010 04:17:42 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Stephen Book http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-18 Stephen Book Tue, 01 Sep 2009 03:30:19 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-18 You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash

]]> By: Stephen Book http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-19 Stephen Book Tue, 01 Sep 2009 03:30:19 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-19 You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash

]]> By: Alan http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-17 Alan Tue, 01 Sep 2009 00:31:22 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-17 Cute idea. Could certainly use a bit of editing and typo correction, then it would be really tight. A few times you used your when you should have used you're - it's a common mistake, but one that you should really look out for. For some reason, things like that stand out more than regular typos. I want to know now if his vegetables improved or not! Cute idea. Could certainly use a bit of editing and typo correction, then it would be really tight. A few times you used your when you should have used you're – it's a common mistake, but one that you should really look out for. For some reason, things like that stand out more than regular typos. I want to know now if his vegetables improved or not!

]]> By: KjM http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-16 KjM Mon, 31 Aug 2009 00:47:29 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-16 "But why my garden?" "It was there." That clinched it for me. It made the whole insanity of it work perfectly. Things happen, because they just happen - up to and including aliens burying plant food in your vegetable garden because it's there. I enjoyed this - many thanks. "But why my garden?"

"It was there."

That clinched it for me. It made the whole insanity of it work perfectly. Things happen, because they just happen – up to and including aliens burying plant food in your vegetable garden because it's there.

I enjoyed this – many thanks.

]]> By: Eric J. Krause http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-15 Eric J. Krause Sun, 30 Aug 2009 20:05:55 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-15 Nice story. Funny how there is no grand scheme, just a right place at the right time. That's more likely the truth of it all anyway. Nice story. Funny how there is no grand scheme, just a right place at the right time. That's more likely the truth of it all anyway.

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-14 J. M. Strother Sun, 30 Aug 2009 00:59:44 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-14 Cute piece. Gave me a chuckle. Welcome to #fridayflash. Hope to see you next week! ~jon Cute piece. Gave me a chuckle. Welcome to #fridayflash. Hope to see you next week!
~jon

]]> By: dan powell http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-13 dan powell Sat, 29 Aug 2009 23:07:59 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-13 Great last line. What else would you do, faced with Cyber Mummies with a work order. I like the playfulness of this piece, impressive for being a quick piece of work. Welcom to #fridayflash and look forward to seeing more of your work. Great last line. What else would you do, faced with Cyber Mummies with a work order. I like the playfulness of this piece, impressive for being a quick piece of work. Welcom to #fridayflash and look forward to seeing more of your work.

]]> By: 2mara http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-12 2mara Sat, 29 Aug 2009 15:51:28 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-12 HA! I love it! Ready the FridayFlash, next week will be here sooner than you think ;-) Great story ~2 HA! I love it!

Ready the FridayFlash, next week will be here sooner than you think ;-)

Great story
~2

]]> By: Laura Eno http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Laura Eno Sat, 29 Aug 2009 14:57:07 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-11 Cute story! Welcome to #fridayflash! Cute story! Welcome to #fridayflash!

]]> By: Shannon Esposito http://www.bishopneo.com/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/comment-page-1/#comment-10 Shannon Esposito Sat, 29 Aug 2009 14:33:25 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-10 Cute! Not at all where I thought you were going, which is great. It's very hard to surprise the reader, I've found. Nice job. Cute! Not at all where I thought you were going, which is great. It’s very hard to surprise the reader, I’ve found. Nice job.

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