Comments on: Cyber Mummies http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=cyber-mummies Some assembly required Fri, 02 Dec 2011 14:59:14 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Stephen Book http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-15 Stephen Book Tue, 01 Sep 2009 03:30:19 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-15 <p>You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash </p> You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash

]]> By: Stephen Book http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-16 Stephen Book Tue, 01 Sep 2009 03:30:19 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-16 <p>You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash </p> You got to give the aliens/mummies credit. At least they know something about gardening. ;) Welcome to #FridayFlash

]]> By: Alan http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-14 Alan Tue, 01 Sep 2009 00:31:22 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-14 <p>Cute idea. Could certainly use a bit of editing and typo correction, then it would be really tight. A few times you used your when you should have used you're - it's a common mistake, but one that you should really look out for. For some reason, things like that stand out more than regular typos. I want to know now if his vegetables improved or not! </p> Cute idea. Could certainly use a bit of editing and typo correction, then it would be really tight. A few times you used your when you should have used you're - it's a common mistake, but one that you should really look out for. For some reason, things like that stand out more than regular typos. I want to know now if his vegetables improved or not!

]]> By: KjM http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-13 KjM Mon, 31 Aug 2009 00:47:29 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-13 <p>"But why my garden?" </p> <p><p>"It was there." </p> </p> <p><p>That clinched it for me. It made the whole insanity of it work perfectly. Things happen, because they just happen - up to and including aliens burying plant food in your vegetable garden because it's there. </p> </p> <p><p>I enjoyed this - many thanks. </p> </p> "But why my garden?"

"It was there."

That clinched it for me. It made the whole insanity of it work perfectly. Things happen, because they just happen - up to and including aliens burying plant food in your vegetable garden because it's there.

I enjoyed this - many thanks.

]]> By: Eric J. Krause http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-12 Eric J. Krause Sun, 30 Aug 2009 20:05:55 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-12 <p>Nice story. Funny how there is no grand scheme, just a right place at the right time. That's more likely the truth of it all anyway. </p> Nice story. Funny how there is no grand scheme, just a right place at the right time. That's more likely the truth of it all anyway.

]]> By: J. M. Strother http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-11 J. M. Strother Sat, 29 Aug 2009 20:59:44 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-11 <p>Cute piece. Gave me a chuckle. Welcome to #fridayflash. Hope to see you next week! ~jon</p> Cute piece. Gave me a chuckle. Welcome to #fridayflash. Hope to see you next week! ~jon

]]> By: dan powell http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-10 dan powell Sat, 29 Aug 2009 19:07:59 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-10 <p>Great last line. What else would you do, faced with Cyber Mummies with a work order. I like the playfulness of this piece, impressive for being a quick piece of work. Welcom to #fridayflash and look forward to seeing more of your work.</p> Great last line. What else would you do, faced with Cyber Mummies with a work order. I like the playfulness of this piece, impressive for being a quick piece of work. Welcom to #fridayflash and look forward to seeing more of your work.

]]> By: 2mara http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-9 2mara Sat, 29 Aug 2009 11:51:28 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-9 <p>HA! I love it!</p> <p><p>Ready the FridayFlash, next week will be here sooner than you think ;-)</p> </p> <p><p>Great story ~2</p> </p> HA! I love it!

Ready the FridayFlash, next week will be here sooner than you think ;-)

Great story ~2

]]> By: Laura Eno http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-8 Laura Eno Sat, 29 Aug 2009 10:57:07 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-8 <p>Cute story! Welcome to #fridayflash!</p> Cute story! Welcome to #fridayflash!

]]> By: Shannon Esposito http://www.projectmagnus.org/science-fiction/cyber-mummies/#comment-7 Shannon Esposito Sat, 29 Aug 2009 10:33:25 +0000 http://www.bishopneo.com/?p=157#comment-7 <p>Cute! Not at all where I thought you were going, which is great. It's very hard to surprise the reader, I've found. Nice job.</p> Cute! Not at all where I thought you were going, which is great. It's very hard to surprise the reader, I've found. Nice job.

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